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Zoltán Farmosi

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A landscape

Please advise on composition and BW conversion.

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Inez Correia Marques 23/01/2007 11:50
Fantastic light and composition . the other photographer gives even more interst to the whole picture. i like the idea of watching someone else as they also looking at something. interesting . the branches on the left do not bother me as my eys go directly to the man and the big tree. if it was not mentioned i would have not seen it at all.
it is for me very well balanced.
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Stuart Borland 23/01/2007 11:16
What a pity about the photographer on the right hand side! Otherwise a great picture.
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Jaime Crystal Attenborough 16/01/2007 14:58
i think overall this is one beautiful landscape, full of great shadows and highlights, the composition is perfect i do agree though the tree on the left is a bit annoying but the feel of this image is dark yet peacful if that makes sence,
just lovely work
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J
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Pascal Viyer 16/01/2007 12:01
Excellent !
pv
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Jim McKinniss 15/01/2007 22:24
You have caught a moment of wonderful light. The image is very stimulating because of the mood created by the light and shadows.

I too would like to see the tree branches in the upper left removed since they are competing with the beautifully dark branches of the main tree.

Overall I like this image.

Jim
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Christiane Wüllner 15/01/2007 21:15
oops, i was`nt ready when i touched the publish-botton with an accident. About the composisjon i think it`s ok and i love the sky - it is perfect dramatisc for my taste. I hope it helps you. Regards Christiane
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Christiane Wüllner 15/01/2007 21:11
That`s a real good work in my opinion. I think it works ve with the person in front taking a photo too. But i agree with Daren about the branches
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Daren Borzynski 15/01/2007 12:51
Hi Zoltan

Overall a very nice image.
I like the tones & the contrast is not too high.
The detail is very good in all the trees in the distance.
The only problems that I can see.. is that you have someone else taking photos in your photograph.
I also dislike the branch at the top left of the frame... that is my opinion. You could try cropping it out.. or if you can get back to that place move a bit closer to the main tree & try to remove the branches from your view.

I hope this helps...It's my opinion & I'm sure you will here others.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Cheers!!
Daren
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