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  • Robert van der Sanden 24/03/2006 20:49

    Hi Diana, I find this an interesting experiment or study how you like to call it but then I like people getting off the straight path and try new things.
    The composition could improve, starting with a tighter crop (remove at least a part from the bottom) and place the model slightly more to the right so there is more space in the direction in which she looks.
    But the abstract shapes and the contrasting colors work out nice. Have a look at Armstrong's work and give it another try.
    http://www.billarmstrongphotography.com/
    Warm wishes, Robert
  • Dirk Hofmann 05/03/2006 22:15

    so you wouldn't like if i said "a little bit out of focus"?

    dennis is right ... it doesn't have to be obvious ... but i also can follow jan ...

    at last it's always a matter of personal taste ... and seeing other peoples approaches to art is always a thing which makes me think about my personal understanding of art ... :-)
  • Jan Van Der Hooft 05/03/2006 22:06

    Don't like it this pic