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Jag in the Rain

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Jordan Bussell

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Jag in the Rain

I like this one... please leave me comments, tell me what you think :)
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Lene H 24/10/2006 11:50
I love the picture! I'll have to disagree with Lucien though. I like the angle, I think you shouldn't move further away. And as said before, more focus on the "J", but I like that the main-focus is on the "A" ^^,

/Lene ~ Yellow
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Luke Johnson 23/10/2006 0:09
Great DOP, i like the water droplets as well!
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Radim Spitzer 22/10/2006 14:36
Like the DOF in this one! Thow the burned out right upper corner is very eye distracting and I would compose the the keyhole lower. ;)
Good effort, overall.
Cheers, R.
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Sean-Henry Goddard 21/10/2006 22:49
Well, we have discussed this one many a time before aint we. Well just to say like everyone else, the writing in focus? Or even just the J so it would at minimum have JAG in focus. Other then that, the angle is brilliant, the focus on the rain is good. All in all i like this shot. x
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Dirk Hofmann 21/10/2006 20:58
nice detail, but i would like to have the whole writing sharp ... :-)
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MagInation 21/10/2006 20:48
Hi Jamie,
Nice shot, the rain drops add more details to the composition. I agree with Lucien either focus on the whole name or maybe on the key hole. Also, the upper white right corner is a little bit distracting.

Keep up the good work!
regards,
Marcus

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Jo Gallagher 21/10/2006 20:40
Love it
Love Jags

(like something in an advert)

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Lucien A 21/10/2006 10:25
Nice shot, I also like the colours and the raindrops. Maybe focus on the whole name would be nice (taken from a bit further away).

Still, nice first photo's here on the FC.
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Jamie Hollett 21/10/2006 8:08
Great shot Jordan, love the colour & the drips of rain. Good focus too, keep up this standard of work.
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